tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-94172508277517309.post2378612365417660588..comments2011-02-05T07:49:16.230-08:00Comments on Songs For Shifting Skies.: Autumn Dirt.Brendan T. Kellyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11425030303003745780noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-94172508277517309.post-71574350923717494442010-03-16T15:57:36.789-07:002010-03-16T15:57:36.789-07:00This is a good poem and your use of irnoy in the f...This is a good poem and your use of irnoy in the final stanza enhances the ending. The closed couplet works good too; it'll keep the critiques from asking for more....lol..<br /><br />Keep writing!DeLunaLorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03201643887846419244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-94172508277517309.post-91645703533857825352010-03-15T01:36:26.817-07:002010-03-15T01:36:26.817-07:00"It's one of those things that end up ..."It's one of those things that end up 'writing themselves',..."<br /><br />Yes, makes sense. The story leads you. <br /><br /><br />P.S. Thank you for the add.imageinfomoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09393908470960255397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-94172508277517309.post-16232931848314126892010-03-14T09:02:50.769-07:002010-03-14T09:02:50.769-07:00its a fabulous bit of poetry!its a fabulous bit of poetry!Lucy Furhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07332582605030581045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-94172508277517309.post-38983293345334542002010-03-13T21:42:23.139-08:002010-03-13T21:42:23.139-08:00Thats quite lovely.Thats quite lovely.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-94172508277517309.post-81015393592191959482010-03-13T13:15:22.496-08:002010-03-13T13:15:22.496-08:00I really really like this one. The rhyming works. ...I really really like this one. The rhyming works. This should be a song or something.Dianahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02116281861149407321noreply@blogger.com