Slowing on the shoulder,
After a near-miss jump-start.
Blood pumping and eyes wide
Like jumper cables to the heart.
Eight wheels drawn together,
In a moment, and then it's done.
Of the millions of moments packed into life,
A thousand possibilities, crammed into one.
Ghosts on a see saw,
Two spectres on a ride.
Up and down, over and over,
Into the forefront of my mind.
Two stories on a page,
With a very different end.
One ghost to fade away,
A second ghost to rise again.
Every day's spent moving forward,
And tiptoe-ing on the line.
The scene slows and the car stops,
And everybody's fine.
Wednesday, July 14, 2010
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I truly love this poem. You have captured the thoughts and visions of a near-miss as only a true poet could. Amazing work! :-)
ReplyDeleteI enjoy this poem as it is written in the present tense, for that half a second over which the narrative takes place. The ambiguity of the slow stricture of the stanzas against the real-time of the scene is palpable in terms of conflict, stress and serenity relative to time: a flash of retrospect.
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Wonderful poem
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